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The Hand Is Faster Than The Eye
A Poem From My Book Posted at Jeff Kaye's Blog Invictus
Originally at CounterPunch
The scene is always the same -
Iím intruding in someone elseís dream
Someone much older,
With white hair, pointing
A stick at a bird in a tree.
The moon, of course, is waxing.
Icicles sweet with syrup
Drip from maple branches.
Beyond the split rail fence
Someone slips into the forest.
Itís always over too soon
Before I think it through
Before I remember how
To glide like the redwing
Across the thawing fields.
Her first eye is a diamond
Guiding me through brush
And tangled vines
To her mouth.
Her second eye is a ruby
Drawing me inside
Sparks light my way
Flames lick at
Her third eye is sapphire
Spring fed from
Fear of the Future
To those eating acorns
And huddled around the fire,
The man at the mouth of the cave
Seems tangled in the stars:
In his left hand he shakes a leafy branch
And with his right, he throws stones at the moon.
Through want and hard hunger
They gnaw at bones, suck marrow,
Lick dew off grass, eat roots,
And turn their eyes from the sun.
Blackness and Ruby
It was easy to get lost
among sedge and alder
where the green heron hides,
worshiping sun and corn
and a woman with wings.
Out of the riverbank marsh,
what do I recall of her now?
Her blackness and ruby.
How glad I was to wrench myself
from the sycamoreís trunk
and fling myself into the fire
that burns in her crypt,
How simple it was to follow,
speaking in tongues,
The poems in Doug Valentine's book, "A Crow's Dream" are meticulously and carefully crafted. Many are tender meditations, deeply centered in Nature. Others contain striking juxtapositions and thought-provoking metaphors, like the three baby snakes who appear in the grass on Easter Sunday morning. There is even an imaginative personification of Talent as a beautiful, demanding and fickle girl.
Valentine has an acute sense of what is true; it ranges from the innocent to the mundane to the decadent. Especially rich are his vivid observations of people, from the swaggering Cadillac Jack, to the twirling girl in Shadow Land and the boy who is watching her, to the lost and struggling Marvis Flynn, who "wraps the pieces of himself in a blanket"."
Great poetry is something that you can never tire of reading; some mysterious quality enters your eyes and ears; there's something that you never want to stop looking at, like if you had a Gaugin painting on the wall of your tenement room. Great poetry puts you in a trance, even when it describes complete horror, like in some of Neruda, you are dazzled by the beauty of the language. "A Crow's Dream" is great poetry-- any lover of language and its music just knows it when they see it. Here, listen:
faces in the stream
among passing clouds
have never been so near
or so far:
the look in their eyes
is lost in the time it takes
to give a name.
I could say that over and over again forever. I could learn everything there is to know about life with those few words. There is a great range of feeling and emotion in this collection of poems: vast spiritual meditations like "faces in the stream" to a child's instinctive disgust at false, boring adult rituals and empty beliefs, like "Memorial Day." I will take these poems with me wherever I go.
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I like writing poems I call Quatrains. Below is a sampling:
Dancing flames curl the paper edges of sky
Silver and turquoise tinsel etch the air
Like scars upon the universal eye
From viewing beauty everywhere.
Dream feelings vague at the city gate
Cloaked in alien garb absurdly congregate
And with incoherent shouts in costumes leap
Upon the amorphous landscapes of sleep.
As Never Before
We step, we hope, in harmony
Across a moonlit checkered floor
Beneath red lanterns on a string
In love again, as never before.
Your ephemeral glow
Your refined sense of reserve
Your shimmers in the darkness
Get on my last nerve.
The Shape Iím In
Sometimes I feel fat
Sometimes thin -
Itís a comment about
The shape Iím in.
tactical nuclear Israeli rock
that's the beat he walk
terrorized round the clock, like a bomb, tick tock
that's the rap he talk.
Chinese Take Out
The colonialists had it right
Mao is graffiti on the Great Wall
Greed and the Internet will shatter China
Into a thousand tinkling Tibets.
Cuban Cigars and Russian Caviar
Cuban cigars and Russian caviar:
The foundations of capitalism.
Napoleon brandy, a guillotine handy:
The tools of radical revision.
More or Less
More or less having is only half;
Often one must stifle a laugh.
The charm is of this sense and type,
Working only when the time is right.
Wash and Dry
You always say that fair is fair:
Youíre gonna wash, Iím gonna dry.
So how come I make you laugh,
And you make me cry and cry?
Phases of the Moon
The getting done of this thing
Is planting a garden in spring:
Learning the words to the sparrowís tune,
Following the phases of the moon.
Presenting things we knew, but forgot,
Fishing now in a shallow stream,
The speckled trout slip through my net Ė
And for once the image is free.